Originally Posted by
Mr_White
Now that I'm caught up on the thread, some of what I wrote here is redundant to thing you and others said...
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Maybe move the shirt a bit less, as well as your strong hand. There may be balance between that, and getting the shirt out of the way before your strong hand is getting on the grip (to avoid a handful of shirt around the gun.)
The elongated lean forward happening late in the draw looks like it would cause gun movement when you want to be stopping, aiming, and finalizing trigger. Get the gun all the way out and bring it to a smooth stop quickly.
Let the gun pause on target just a little longer after firing rather than rocketing back toward the holster as soon as the shot is away.
Holster slower and with less force. That's too hard and fast to put the gun into the holster.
It's best if we have a view of everything that moves. If possible get your hands into the frame even at their start position, and the gun into the frame when it is fully extended and firing - horizontal video frame is usually better than vertical.